Sunday, 1 April 2007
Not about cricket....
Waiana
“Fear has led me here;
Love will lead me hence”
Your monologue was charming,
A path in your wildness
I have heard it all before
Of course.
Cliché.
“He laid down his life;
Now I lay down mine”
A ripple in my persona,
Your chaste soliloquy turned red hot
I have heard it all before
Of course.
Touché.
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2 comments:
Well done tim, i like this much. It has nice symmetry.
I wish that I knew more about poetry to actually be able to appreciate this. It is nice though.
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